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Negative Verb Forms
Negative verbs are seldom used in traditional Japanese haiku, since the purpose of the haiku is usually to turn the reader to a positive side of life.
So even if a positive meaning does not exactly correspond to your
"experience", for the sake of the haiku form, it is better to change a verb into the positive form.
Here is an example
wetland shells -
they do know nothing
of the moon
better turned positive to
wetland shells -
they really know all
about the moon
Paraphrasing a lesson from Masaki Sensei 正木 ゆう子
Yuko Masaki
of NHK Haiku, March 2009.
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Things found on the way
むづがゆき翼のつけ根涅槃西風
muzugayuki tsubasa no tsukene nehan-nishi
the roots of my wings
begin to itch -
Nirvana West Wind 
Yuko Masaki
Nehan Nishi 涅槃西風 
west wind during the Nehan-Festival on March 15
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3/17/2009
Negative Verbs
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2 comments:
Arigat, Gabi-san, for sharing this gem.
I'd like to see more her work!
R.W.
Thanks Gabi... solid advice. I agree with her whole heartedly.
D.
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