tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-820047071744679108.post4850394342559182319..comments2023-05-23T03:54:17.181-07:00Comments on Introducing Haiku Poets and Topics . . . . . WKD: Sakai YameiGabi Grevehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/16362456518166174106noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-820047071744679108.post-8256234580424036872009-08-06T14:33:43.011-07:002009-08-06T14:33:43.011-07:00Thanks a lot, Robin!
Much appreciated and I like t...Thanks a lot, Robin!<br />Much appreciated and I like the nuances it takes, especially your second version.<br />GabiGabi Grevehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16362456518166174106noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-820047071744679108.post-10742825250978067472009-08-06T08:12:16.346-07:002009-08-06T08:12:16.346-07:00Gabi, before coming here i did a quick translation...Gabi, before coming here i did a quick translation<br /><br />A pheasant’s call --<br /> in that one sound the whole<br /> spring field, swallowed!<br /><br />now i see it is similar to Blyth. OK another<br /><br />Just like that!<br />I take in the whole spring field:<br />A pheasant's call.<br /><br />The two pretty much cover it -- sorry no time for more! rdgrobin d gillhttp://www.paraverse.orgnoreply@blogger.com